Description: On Tuesday we went to camp. The camp we went to was called El rancho it was in waikanae. We did ten activities. The ten activities we had were the horses,mini golf,archery,kayaks,rifles,pool,water slide,low ropes,rafts and team initiative the activity that made me mostly proud was the horse because I have never been on a horse before I have only been on a pony and I was bare back riding it and I fell under it and it almost kicked me in the face so I was proud of myself getting on the biggest horse there I got on Finn next time I think that I should not be scared getting on a horse ever again because now I know they are friendly. We also had only three dinners my favourite was the chicken.
feedback\feedforward: I think that your goals that you chose were very good because they were clear and acurate. Next time you could put the days and your evaluation in order so the reader doesn't read what they already have read.